First Draft/Evaluation
With the first draft to our final thriller, we found that it wasn't very good. We didn't connect some of the scenes, so they will not make sense. E.g. at 1:34, we can see the character 'Nortz' walking away angrily, but we are not shown why he is angry. Furthermore, the music that we chose doesn't fit in the genre of thrillers. It is rather informal and laid back, which is not the effect we are trying to give from our thriller. Furthermore, we forgot to give our student examination numbers, so the examiner would not be able to identify who made this film easily. Lastly, we did not include a title to our thriller, so it just begins and ends without telling us what this film would've been called.
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